i feel like i had a pretty good grasp on my assignment for the da paper.
i might be able to take out one or two of my samples and maybe elaborate on one focal point..more. maybe- but then again that might not be DA because you have to analyize every aspect of the text- im not sure- i'm definitely waiting to see what my classmates think..
expectations-
i'm definitely expecting people to tell me i'm too passive. i know my writing is kind of blunt and straight forward- but that's how i am when i speak/write..blog.
i'm also expecting someone to comment on how mean i am to "A".. i dont mean to sound like i hate the girl! (haha) i'm just using her as my main point of justification- she is the reason were writing the paper anyway!
i want someone to tell me what i might be able to alter and change to make my point more solid- despite the fact that i did go prettttyyy deep with every point ;) ...
oh I'M DEFINITELY EXPECTING SOMEONE TO TELL ME MY QUESTION IS TOOOOO EXTENSIVE TO UNDERSTAND- but i thought about it and rethought and rewrote- i like it. i think if you read it.. and think about each part of the question- you'll understand as well. but i'm always up for constructive criticism!
About Me
- jennifer_macdonald
- I'm one of four kids, big family. I love food; eating and cooking it. I am really big on music, every type.(I am a huge Beatles fan). I'm a typical jersey girl- love the beach, night life, summer time fun, but enjoy the winter. I like going out- but appreciate a nice movie night. I have the best friends in the world and as of right now, I wouldn't change anything in or about my life, for the world. I am going to Kean University as an English Major (literature option)- Elementary Education (elementary, middle and secondary edu.) (k-5 5-8) I'm a glass half full kind of person with many aspirations which I intend to fulfill.
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